Fashion Layouts

At the moment I've been playing around with drawing fashion models in magazines and then trying to use these drawings in some layout ideas. This is something I would love to explore more as I have always had an interest in fashion and reading fashion magazines since I was little. So why not combine my interests of Fashion and drawing.

 This the first one I have done of this set and idea. I think the thing which took me the longest is the jacket, who knew that repeatedly drawing small lines could be so relaxing …

It would be great to get some feedback. Which one do you guys prefer?